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Pretentious Poetry

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Pretentious entry 1
Pretentious entry 1
740 days ago 2 comments Categories: poetry Tags:

 

sometimes i feel

like a wandering vine

wandering 

meandering towards

the elusive light

flimming and flamming

without a back bone

without a fight

clammoring 

needing a stright stick

to guide me right

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  •  Sweetassunshine wrote 673 Days Ago (positive) 
     
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    Very nice :) was that supposed to be "straight" dear? quick fix ;) Enjoyed your poem. :D love the mood.
     
       
     
     
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  •  Israwr wrote 727 Days Ago (neutral) 
     
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    pretentious indeed.. I like. :)
     
       
     
     
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